Post by ROYALSTANDARD on Dec 21, 2011 16:38:58 GMT -5
pending.
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we need you to flesh her out a bit more in both her history and personality. it's fine for her to be a good girl, but even good girls have bad habits or character flaws. there is a little bad in every good person and a little bad in every good person. also, i noticed a couple of things you may want to modify in her history. first off, her great grandmother probably wouldn't be old enough to have been in the titanic. maybe make it her great-great grandmother? just to be more historically accurate. also, 65000 pounds isn't enough money to put her family in the 'elite' bracket. it's equal to around $100,000 nowadays, and even considering that would have been almost a century ago when money was worth more, it may equal out to maybe $400,000 approximately? the elites are filthy rich (their families are billionaires and millionaires and sometimes even royalty or mob members), so she'd fit more in the transplant or townie group unless you modified how rich her family is.
basically just give her personality and history some more 'oomf' for us and make sure to double-check facts before including them. once you work out those few kinks, we'll look her back over. thanks!
